To help me get a job in the Gaming Industry!

I'm serious, long story short, I have an interview in maybe one week, 2 if I'm lucky.....And lets just say I'm not proud at all of what I could stick in my Portfolio, and drastic times call for drastic measures, so I decided to make an Anti-Grav Racer, and So the Whiplash was born.

And here the part where I'd greatly appreciate your help, basically due to the extremely short time frame I would greatly appreciate anyone who is willing taking a look at the most Recent Version(First Version) and give me some Honest Critiques.

Again;
Whiplash Work in Progress 01
Whiplash Work in Progress 02 <--NEWEST VERION

MAKE ME PROUD!

And Thanks in advance,

Mike